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假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括： (1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)； (2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)； (3)你对该地方的印象和感受。 注意：(1)词数不少于100； (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 A Beautiful Place in China March 19, 2021 By Li Jin 【答案解析】 A Beautiful Place in China March 19, 2021 By Li Jin Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project. Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and color1 ful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today. I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：说明文 时态： 一般现在时 结构：总分法 第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。 要求： 1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点 ①四川的地理位置：中国西南部 ②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程 2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程 ① 九寨沟是自然保护区 ②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物 ③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉作用 3.  你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） be located in；world-famous；places of interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；have a chance to do…；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be amazed by 第三步：连词成句 (1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. (2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project. (3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. (4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and color1 ful lakes. (5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys. (6) There are many species of rare plants protected here. (7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. (8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago. (9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today. (10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇 1.表递进关系：what is more 2.表转折关系：however 3.表示列举：such as, like 【点睛】[高分句型1] What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and color1 ful lakes.（what引导的主语从句） [高分句型2] Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.（现在分词作状语）