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现在很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语。你的英语笔友李平也是如此。最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、记忆力减退。请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议。 写作要点： 1．简述过度使用耳机的现象； 2．分析过度使用耳机的危害；（至少两点） 3．提出你的建议。(至少两条) 注意： 1．要点齐全，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．字数120左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3．可能用到的词汇： 过度使用耳机overuse earphone;  注意力不集中less concentration;  记忆力减退bad memory Dear Li Ping, I received your letter yesterday _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________ Best wishes. Lin Tao 答案 Dear Li Ping, I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing. There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon. Best wishes. Lin Tao 解析 试题分析：现在，很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语。你的英语笔友李平也是如此。最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、记忆力减退。请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议。 写作要点：1．简述过度使用耳机的现象；2．分析过度使用耳机的危害；（至少两点）3．提出你的建议。(至少两条)写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1．要点齐全，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯；2．字数120左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 扩展知识 I have learned that you are looking for an English editor and I am interested in it.宾语从句和并列举的结合；I have a good command of both written and spoken English, so it will be easy work for me to deal with all kinds of English papers.句中运用了so引导的并列句；Besides, I have good computer skills, which plays an important role in editing.非限制性定语从句在句中出现；I am sure you will have a good time working with me.宾语从句和固定句式完美结合；All in all, I believe I am the right person for the job.固定词组和宾语从句巧妙结合；I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。